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Post by SarcasticRaven on Nov 27, 2004 22:15:14 GMT -5
I wrote this song after getting into an arguement with my parents. You all probably know how it is. It's very sarcastic, apologizing for being who you are.
I'm Sorry
I’m sorry I’m not perfect Sorry that I’m myself Sorry I don’t act like somebody else Sorry that I can’t be anybody but me Sorry I can’t be what you want me to be
Sorry I don’t pretend Sorry I don’t lie to my friends Sorry I have my own thoughts Sorry I’m something you’re not Sorry that I like who I am Sorry I make my own plans
Sorry I break the rules Sorry I don’t try to be cool Sorry I don’t care what people say Sorry I won’t care any day
Sorry that I believe Sorry that I daydream Sorry I am only human Sorry I don’t understand Sorry I held out my hand
Sorry you don’t get me Sorry for who I want to be Sorry I have a life Sorry I like the night Sorry I put up a fight
Sorry life’s not fair Sorry I don’t care Sorry I can speak for myself Sorry I’m not like everybody else
Sorry I don’t pretend to care Sorry I breathe the same air Sorry you’re ashamed Sorry I won’t take the blame Sorry I won’t play your game
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Post by jamers on Nov 29, 2004 21:40:05 GMT -5
oh i love that! i can relate sooooo well!
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Post by originalityisok on Jan 20, 2005 21:00:31 GMT -5
wow, i no ur spossed to use repetition to like, enhance ur writing, but man, there were a lot of sorry's in there!!! (but thats not a bad thing--don't get me rong, cuz i understand that its in the nature of the poem!!) but its one of those words--u no, u repeat it so often that it starts to sound really weird and u wonder if its even the right word cuz it sounds so distorted?? ya, my friend and i have discussed that numerous times, and now we can add sorry to the list!! anyway, it took me like 100 words extra to really just say that i loved it and that i can so relate too!!
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