untitled poem, any ideas??

[originalityisok]

This is a poem i wrote about a year after my friend died of cancer. please read and tell me wat u think, im open to suggestions, if it doesn't flow, watever, or an idea for a name would be good too!! thanx!!


Life doesn’t seem to have a purpose
Since you’re no longer here
By my side
It’s been over a year
But my heart is still swelled with tears
I can’t seem to erase the pain
Even though I’ve tried

Life doesn’t seem the same, girl
Now that your life on earth is finished
I may still be living, but I’ve realized
That you lived more in your last few months
Than I’ve lived in my whole life

You were so strong, so loving, so full of life
I can’t begin to explain
Just how much
I want to live like you lived
You lived life fuller than anyone,
Anyone else I know
And, girl, if there’s one thing I learned
From your short, yet long years
It’s how to live, and live life fully
Cuz life’s too short
I may have always known that
But you brought it to reality.

We love and miss you Keri,
Say hello to the angels up there as you sing, dance, laugh, play
When we meet at last in Heaven
I want to be able to say
That I lived life to the fullest
Just like the strongest girl I knew…<br>And that’s you.

[SarcasticRaven]

Wow, I really liked that poem. You're a good writer. Well, I think it flowed pretty well. As for a title...I think something like Life Without You would be good, but really, the title comes from what you feel inside at the time you wrote it. Anyways, great job and I hope you write more. Keep up the great work!